the Police
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INT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR - DAY

It is getting toward dusk and the sun is starting the last part of its descent in the western sky. An unmarked, nondescript police car is parked in the lot. Inside are ROBERT HERNANDEZ, chicano, overweight, 40's, detective lieutenant in the department and TONI DICKENS, detective, 28, long brown hair and an intelligent face. They are sitting in the front of the car looking out to sea and munching on donuts with coffee cups on the dash.

the police converse near the Sea

TONI
The lifeguard almost made it to the lady.

HERNANDEZ
What would he have done if he'd made it to her? Beat on the shark with his flotation device?

They look at one another in acknowledgement of the futility of that.

TONI
What does the mayor expect the police department to do about death by sharks. It's a homicide,
a killing of a person, but the instrument is a sea mammal. Do we have jurisdiction for that?
Shouldn't they call in the zoo people, or Sea World, or the fishing industry?

HERNANDEZ
All of the above.

Toni looks over at him, donut in mouth preventing her from speaking.

HERNANDEZ
The mayor wants us to do the leg work between all of those agencies and whoever else can help
us with the problem. We co-ordinate the investigation. Find out everything about sharks, why they
happen to be in San Diego right now, their living habits, feeding habits, why they attack humans,
everything. TONI I bet the hotel and restaraunt people are worried the tourists might stay away
and they'll lose money.

HERNANDEZ
This lady today. That's bad enough. But that shark attack last week.

Hernandez just shakes his head slowly.

HERNANDEZ
One death by shark every week and this town will go back to being a quiet navy port.
No tourists, no hotels, no restaraunts, no need for a large police force.

Toni has been watching his spiel intently.

TONI
That might not be so bad. Small quiet town, not much crime in the street.

Hernandez gives her the look to bring her back into the real world. She goes back into police mode.

TONI
And I've been volunteered to be laison between all these sources of shark information,
to bring all this information to a central command post, so to speak?

Hernandez nods his head in affirmation.

HERNANDEZ
Do you want to hear to best part?

Toni nods her head slowly.

HERNANDEZ
They're calling this thing Operation Bruce. Get it?

She nods 'no.'

HERNANDEZ
That great white in Jaws. His name was "Bruce."

Still shaking her head.

TONI
Cute. Real cute.

CUT TO: EXT. SHORES PARKING LOT - DAY

Hans and Mark are seated against the wall at the Shores, Hans is drinking beer, Mark has an orange juice. The surf behind is of small size and the beach is sparsely crowded.

soaking the sun

sitting against the bathhouse wall at the Shores

MARK
Not much happening down here. Surf is small up and down the coast.

HANS
I hear that.

Turns over his shoulder and takes a long look at the water.

HANS
Let's go uptown, maybe somethin's happening up there.

They move away from the wall and walk across the cement, carrying their drinks past the 'no alcohol' sign and cross into the street. Hans looks back at the sign, points at it with his left hand for Mark and continues walking.

HANS
Nowadays, since you can't drink anymore, that sign doesn't apply to you.

Mark just looks at him, holds his orange juice in front of his mouth, shakes his head sadly, and takes a drink of it. As he walks to his car, Hans looks down the roadway and sees a bright red Toyota pickup truck moving in his direction, driven by JULIE DAHL, 21, long blond hair and excellent body. The discerning eye will note the license plate of her car is Arizona. Hans stops in the middle of the road as Mark proceeds to their old cadillac surf convertible with the boards sticking out of the back seat. The pickup truck is moving slowly through the parking lot as Hans stands in front of it and waves his left hand for it to stop.

checking the cars

hood check

HANS
Hood check!

Mark looks back at him and he motions to the Toyota truck as it approaches him. With his left hand raised like a traffic cop, Hans forces Julie to stop as she drives right up to him. She is a mixture of amused and amazed at his boldness and she pulls to a stop, inches from him. Hans walks over to her driver side, where the window is down.

HANS
Hi there.

He smiles at her coyly and then proceeds with his spiel.

HANS
Not to alarm you or anything, but you've got some dark fluid draining beneath your engine.
I thought you might like to know that before it blows up.

A look of concern crosses over Julie's face.

HANS
Could cost you a lot of money.
Hesitant look on her face.

HANS
I think I should do a hood check for your right now, could save you a lot of money.

Julie is thinking of the possible problems with her truck.

HANS
I won't charge you anything.

Anxiously.

JULIE
My parents just bought this truck for me. There can't be anything wrong with it.

HANS
Hey, the government is always making the auto manufacturers recall new vehicles.

He motions his hands to the side.

HANS
Pull it over to the side, here.

He motions to the hood of the truck.

HANS
Open your hood, and I'll show you.

Julie grimaces a little, expecting the worst, and moves the truck off to the side of the road. Hans reaches through the driver window and pulls the hood latch. Then he moves to the front of the truck and opens the hood up. He looks into it for several seconds, looks beside it toward Julie, looks back where he pours some of the beer from his can onto a hose, and then moves around to the driver door.

spilt beer

Hans pours some beer onto a hose

HANS
I think you better turn your engine off and take a look at what I've found.

Julie turns off the engine, Hans opens the door for her and she steps out of the cab and around to the front of the truck. Hans is with her and points at the beer fluid.

HANS
Not as bad as I thought. Real small leak. You probably could have gone a couple
of hundred more miles before your engine would blow up.

JULIE
Really? Thank you very much for pointing this out to me.

Hans moves over to the Cadillac and starts looking for a tool in the trunk, which has no lock.

HANS
Let me get a screw driver. I'll tighten up that clamp and your problem will be fixed.

Hans retrieves the screw driver and carries it over to the engine, where he tightens up a clamp that is already at optimum torque.

HANS
There. Good as new. Now you can drive in safety.

Julie looks at him in new light, gradually becoming aware of his good looks.

JULIE
Thank you very much. You're very kind. I don't suppose you want payment?

Hans shakes his head in agreement.

HANS
But you know what. Nah, you probably don't know how to swim.

She looks at him with interest.

JULIE
What? I can swim. Come on! Three years on the high school swimming team.

Hans gives his good looking smile.

HANS
How would you like me to teach you how to surf?

JULIE
You mean now?

HANS
Yeah. While the sun is still out. The ocean is right over here and I've got my board in the car


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